Asking for Reviews

I’m coming back from a long weekend writer’s retreat and playing catch up on my emails and all the stuff that makes up life. In my emails, I found several requests for reviews, some of which I had to turn down. Reviews are difficult to get (and give) and I try very hard to accommodate authors, but I do have my limits – as do most reviewers. Thus, this notice.

When you go to a reviewer website, please be sure you read all their rules and preferences. Lately, I’ve had to turn down multiple requests for reviews for “thrillers with terrorists” – I will not read them. Nor do I do zombies or horror. Or anything with graphic gore. Just because your best friend thought it was the best book ever, that doesn’t mean I will like it.

Reviewing is very subjective. One person may absolutely love a book while another will not. That doesn’t mean it’s a good or bad book – it just means the people reading it have different opinions. The writing may be brilliant, but that doesn’t mean every reader will enjoy the book.

I spend a lot of time reviewing books – time I could spend on my own writing, but I try to help my fellow authors where I can. I also spotlight books and authors I like. I do not charge for this even though it does take a lot of my time. So a word of advice – if you want a review, read the preferences of the sites you go to and follow them.

Thank you for coming to the Sparkling Reviews site.

Writing Tips, Thoughts for the week ahead

August 12

Birthdays: Helena Blavatsky (1831), Jacinto Benavente (1866), Edith Hamilton (1867), Mary Roberts Rinehart (1876), Zema Sharp (1889), Ruth Stiles Gannett (1923), Donald Justice (1925), Wallace Markfield (1926), William Goldman (1931), Walter Dean Myers (1937), Gail Parent (1940), Deborah Howe (1946), Sue Monk Kidd (1948), Ann Martin (1955), Katherine Boo (1964), Anthony Swofford (1970)

Zema Sharp is known for creating the “Dick and Jane” readers.

Donald Justice won the 1980 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry for “Selected Poems”

Deborah Howe is known for the “Bunnicula” series written with her husband.

Quote: “It has always seemed strange to me that in our endless discussions about education so little stress is laid on the pleasure of becoming an educated person, the enormous interest it adds to life. To be able to be caught up into the world of thought—that is to be educated.” [Saturday Evening Post, September 27, 1958]” ― Edith Hamilton

“Everyone thinks that having a talent is a matter of luck; no one thinks that luck could be a matter of talent.” ― Jacinto Benavente

Tip: Get yourself a good dictionary, thesaurus, and grammar book—or know where to look for them online. The Chicago Manual of Style is considered the best for most writing. Also Merriam-Webster’s Dictionary and Roget’s Thesaurus. And use them!

Jumpstart: Pretend you’re a doll living in a doll house. What is it like? What do you see from your vantage point? Who plays with you? In what way?

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August 13

Birthdays: Alfred Hitchcock (1899), Kamila Shamsie (1973), Tom Perotta (1961), Sharon Kay Penman (1945), Nikolaus Lenau (1802)

Quote: “The hardest part about being a writer is not getting your commas in the right place, but getting your head in the right place.” – Ralph Keyes

Tip: Secondary characters should not take over a scene unless there’s a very good reason. They are there to support the main characters or add color to the story, not to be the main reason for the story. If they start to take over, then maybe you’re telling the story from the wrong point of view.

Jumpstart: Pick a famous piece of art or sculpture and write about the artist as s/he was creating it.

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August 14

Birthdays: Russell Baker (1925), William Kittredge (1932), Alice Provensen (1918)

Quote: “Get out of your own way. Do not let the hows and whys stop you from writing. “ – Susan Macias

Tip: Read your dialogue out loud. Does it sound like real people are talking? Or is it stilted and long winded? You should strive to keep dialogue real, but don’t copy real speech. If you listen to real people talking, you’ll find that most conversations are full of inanities.

Jumpstart: You’re on your way to a job interview. You stop at a convenience store for some coffee and a rude person cuts in front of you. Then turns and spills his drink on your new suit. And blames you. You tell him off….and get to the interview a few minutes late only to see him on the other side of the desk. What do you do?

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August 15

Birthdays: Sir Walter Scott (1771), Thomas de Quincey (1785), Edith Nesbit (1858), Sri Aurobindo (1872), Edna Ferber (1885), Julia Child (1912), Leonard Baskin (1922), Linda Ellerbee (1944), Garry Disher (1949), Stieg Larsson (1954), Mary Jo Salter (1954)

Edna Ferber won the 1924 Pulitzer for Fiction for “So Big”

Quote: “Books should be cherished, like children, books are for the next generation, like children, like history.” – Edna Ferber

Tip: When writing a scene with setting, don’t forget about background noises we hear every day—birds chirping (or not for suspense), traffic, thunder, etc. Also think about background smells and other sensory items.

Jumpstart: The old stairs creaked and groaned under her weight and she was afraid the noise would…

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August 16

Birthdays: Hugo Gernsback (1884), T.E. Lawrence (1888), Georgette Heyer (1902), Wallace Thurman (1902), William Maxwell, Jr. (1908), Matt Christopher (1917), Charles Bukowski (1920), Diana Wynne Jones (1934), Benjamin Alire Saenz (1954), Jennifer Donnelly (1963), Valeria Luiselli (1983)

Hugo Gernsback’s contributions to science fiction were so great that the prestigious Hugo Award is named for him.

T.E. Lawrence is well known as Lawrence of Arabia. His books include “Seven Pillars of Wisdom” and “Revolt in the Desert”

Georgette Heyer essentially began the Regency romance genre of writing.

William Maxwell, Jr. won the 1982 National Book Award for “So Long, See You Tomorrow”

Benjamin Alire Saenz won the 1992 American Book Award for “Calendar of Dust”

Quote: “A library is a place full of mouth-watering food for thought.” – Diana Wynne Jones

Tip: Passive vs. active voice: active voice (preferred) is when the subject of the sentence is doing something while passive is where the thing is having something done to it. Active: John threw the ball. Passive: the ball was thrown by John. Active voice gives your writing more impact.

Jumpstart: You hate big, fancy parties but must attend one coming up because it’s in your honor. What did you do? What happens?

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August 17

Birthdays: Ted Hughes (1930), V.S. Naipaul (1932), Herta Muller (1953), Jonathan Franzen (1959), Jessie Burton (1982),

V.S. Naipaul won the 2001 Nobel Prize in Literature

Herta Muller won the 2009 Nobel Prize in Literature

Jonathan Franzen won the 2001 National Book Award for Fiction

Quote: “You are who you choose to be.” ― Ted Hughes, The Iron Man

“Read it out loud. I did this five times with The Muse – exhausting, but helpful. The brain, when you read silently, often corrects things for you. It’s only when you hear the rhythm of your sentences aloud, does your choice of words fall, or clear the hurdle. Muddy images, unintentionally repetitious adjectives, things that just don’t *land*…the list goes on.” – Jessie Burton

Tip: When a writer stutters, it means that s/he has used the same major word twice within the same sentence or paragraph, or has started too many sentences or paragraphs the same way, has given all his or her characters names that start with the same letter, or has repeated the same action too many times. Look over your work. How often have you “stuttered”?

Jumpstart: You’re on your way back from a trip. At the luggage kiosk, you grab what you’re sure is your bag. After all, it had that red ribbon you specifically tied to it. When you get home, you open it and find…

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August 18

Birthdays: A.A. Milne (1882), William Sansom (1912), Elsa Morante (1912), Brian Aldiss (1925), Robert Anton Wilson (1932), Sonia Levitin (1934), Paula Danziger (1944), Brian Pinkney (1961), Nicole Krauss (1974),

Quote: “How do you spell ‘love’?” – Piglet
“You don’t spell it…you feel it.” – Pooh”
― A.A. Milne

“A writer wants something more than money for his work: he wants permanence.” – A.A. Milne

Tip: Which witch is which? They’re over there with their parents. To be, or two bee—which is the right question? Homonyms trip up more writers than any other words. The most common mix-ups are usually those dealing with apostrophes, especially it’s vs. its and they’re/their/there. And you can’t rely on a spell check program to find these errors for you. They aren’t spelled incorrectly—but they are often used incorrectly. Have someone who knows the difference check your work.

Jumpstart: They say that time heals all wounds, but years have passed since that day, and I still feel…

Happy Anniversary

I don’t normally do personal posts, but… today is my 50th anniversary. Yep, I’ve been married to the same guy for fifty years. That’s a half a century. And yes, I am *that* old. LOL. So just for the fun of it, I’m going to spotlight some books and things that were around fifty years ago.

First, “The Reader’s Digest Condensed Books” was quite popular back then.

Revolution In the Air: Songs of Bob Dylan

A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula LeGuin

Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Richard Bach

The Odessa File by Frederick Forsythe

Once is Not Enough by Jacqueline Susanne

Breakfast of Champions by Kurt Vonnegut

The Hollow Hills by Mary Stewart

The Honorary Consul by Graham Greene

Burr by Gore Vidal

The Princess Bride by William Goldman

Rendezvous with Rama by Arthur C. Clarke

A Wind in the Door by Madeleine L’Engle

I’m OK, You’re OK by Thomas Harris

Dr. Atkins Diet Revolution by Robert Atkins

The Joy of Sex by Alex Comfort

Top 100 songs of 1973:

“Tie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Tree”Tony Orlando and Dawn

“Bad, Bad Leroy Brown”Jim Croce

“Killing Me Softly with His Song”Roberta Flack

“Let’s Get It On”Marvin Gaye

“My Love”Paul McCartney & Wings

“Why Me”Kris Kristofferson

“Crocodile Rock”Elton John

“Will It Go Round in Circles”Billy Preston

“You’re So Vain”Carly Simon

“Touch Me in the Morning”Diana Ross

“The Night the Lights Went Out in Georgia”Vicki Lawrence

“Playground in My Mind”Clint Holmes

“Brother Louie”Stories

“Delta Dawn”Helen Reddy

“Me and Mrs. Jones”Billy Paul

“Frankenstein”The Edgar Winter Group

“Drift Away”Dobie Gray

“Little Willy”Sweet

“You Are the Sunshine of My Life”Stevie Wonder

“Half-Breed”Cher

“That Lady”The Isley Brothers

“Pillow Talk”Sylvia Robinson

“We’re an American Band”Grand Funk Railroad

“Right Place Wrong Time”Dr. John

“Wildflower”Skylark

“Superstition”Stevie Wonder

“Loves Me Like a Rock”Paul Simon

“The Morning After”Maureen McGovern

“Rocky Mountain High”John Denver

“Stuck in the Middle with You”Stealers Wheel

“Shambala”Three Dog Night

“Love Train”The O’Jays

“I’m Gonna Love You Just a Little More Baby”Barry White

“Say, Has Anybody Seen My Sweet Gypsy Rose”Tony Orlando and Dawn

“Keep on Truckin'”Eddie Kendricks

“Danny’s Song”Anne Murray

“Dancing in the Moonlight”King Harvest

“Monster Mash”Bobby ‘Boris’ Pickett

“Natural High”Bloodstone

“Diamond Girl”Seals and Crofts

“Long Train Runnin'”The Doobie Brothers

“Give Me Love (Give Me Peace on Earth)”George Harrison

“If You Want Me to Stay”Sly & the Family Stone

“Daddy’s Home”Jermaine Jackson

“Neither One of Us (Wants to Be the First to Say Goodbye)”Gladys Knight & the Pips

“I’m Doin’ Fine Now”New York City

“Could It Be I’m Falling in Love”The Spinners

“Daniel”Elton John

“Midnight Train to Georgia”Gladys Knight & the Pips

“Smoke on the Water”Deep Purple

“The Cover of the Rolling Stone”Dr. Hook & The Medicine Show

“Behind Closed Doors”Charlie Rich

“Your Mama Don’t Dance”Loggins and Messina

“Feelin’ Stronger Every Day”Chicago

“The Cisco Kid”War

“Live and Let Die”Paul McCartney & Wings

“Oh, Babe, What Would You Say?”Hurricane Smith

“I Believe in You (You Believe in Me)”Johnnie Taylor

“Sing”The Carpenters

“Ain’t No Woman (Like the One I’ve Got)”The Four Tops

“Dueling Banjos”Eric Weissberg & Steve Mandell

“Higher Ground”Stevie Wonder

“Here I Am (Come and Take Me)”Al Green

“My Maria”B.W. Stevenson

“Superfly”Curtis Mayfield

“Last Song”Edward Bear

“Get Down”Gilbert O’Sullivan

“Reelin’ in the Years”Steely Dan

“Hocus Pocus”Focus

“Yesterday Once More”The Carpenters

“Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy”Bette Midler

“Clair”Gilbert O’Sullivan

“Do It Again”Steely Dan

“Kodachrome”Paul Simon

“Why Can’t We Live Together”Timmy Thomas

“Do You Wanna Dance?”Bette Midler

“So Very Hard to Go”Tower of Power

“Rockin’ Pneumonia and the Boogie Woogie Flu”Johnny Rivers

“Ramblin’ Man”The Allman Brothers Band

“Masterpiece”The Temptations

“Peaceful”Helen Reddy

“One of a Kind (Love Affair)”The Spinners

“Funny Face”Donna Fargo

“Funky Worm”Ohio Players

“Angie”The Rolling Stones

“Jambalaya (On the Bayou)”Blue Ridge Rangers

“Don’t Expect Me to Be Your Friend”Lobo

“Break Up to Make Up”The Stylistics

“Daisy a Day”Jud Strunk

“Also Sprach Zarathustra ()”Deodato

“Stir It Up”Johnny Nash

“Money”Pink Floyd

“Gypsy Man”War

“The World Is a Ghetto”

“Yes We Can Can”The Pointer Sisters

“Free Ride”The Edgar Winter Group

“Space Oddity”David Bowie

“It Never Rains in Southern California”Albert Hammond

“The Twelfth of Never”Donny Osmond

“Papa Was a Rollin’ Stone”The Temptations

Other things from 1973:

Average Income: $10580.80

Cost of gas: $0.36 per gallon

Movie Ticket: $1.77

Loaf of Bread: $0.27

Stamps: $0.08

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She drives Victory’s success.
He knows someone is pushing them to fail.
And he thinks it’s her…

Max Landford handles every aspect of operations for Victory, a company dedicated to helping people who fall through the cracks. Troubleshooter Sebastian Braga, who can literally smell lies, has been hired to investigate a series of escalating snafus that threaten Victory’s near-perfect record…and she’s his prime suspect.

Bas didn’t expect to fall not only for the smart, challenging woman in charge, but for the family vibe at Victory itself. He may have finally found a place to belong. But their chemistry keeps getting in the way of his investigation, and Max, thrown off balance by his effect on her, worries the distraction is making her job suffer.

When a near-fatal disaster occurs on Max’s watch, it becomes clear that none of the problems are coincidental. She’s stunned to discover she was her bosses’ prime suspect and that Bas has been lying to her since they met. She’d resign, but the threat is growing, and she and Bas have to work together to save the company they both believe in.

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Old Favorites

A search through The Wild Rose Press “Fantasy” section gave me these two old favorites. If you’re looking for fun with a touch of mystery and fantasy, pick these up! (And the others in the series as well!)

Desperately Seeking Salvage

by Misty Simon

Category: Fantasy Fiction

Mel Hargrove, eighties enthusiast, is the protector of much more than random cars and broken washing machines. Each piece in her precious junkyard has a ghost attached to it. No one in Frysville is aware of the secret that’s just down the road from them, and she wants to keep it that way. But when she finds naked statues of aging townspeople in the main square, she must figure out if someone, or something, is missing from her junkyard and out causing havoc. With a host of ghosts behind her and her new boyfriend beside her, Mel is ready to take on almost anything. Almost being the operative word…

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Every Death You Take

by Misty Simon

Category: Fantasy Fiction

They’ve faced a crazy ghost and a madwoman, gained new friends, and sent foes to their final resting place, but Mel Hargrove and her boyfriend Becker are not sure what to do with this new situation. Every year Mel takes a reliable (and portable) ghost to do a routine bad-mojo cleaning for a lovely woman who lives in town, and all goes well until she comes out to the car and finds a new, unknown ghost sitting in her back seat. How can she be just roaming around unattached to any object, unlike any ghosts Mel knows? Is she a brand-new ghost? Where did she come from? And why is she singing a theme song from an ’80s television show? Mel and Becker will have to find the answers — and the dead girl’s body — before it’s too late to help this lost maiden-ghost in distress.

ISBN: (digital) 9781509215188  

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Spotlight: Victoria Smith

When Mia realizes she’s the only person left in the world, her first thought is that she’s free. After years of abuse by her mother and an accident that makes her financially responsible for her comatose mother’s care, Mia embraces her new life.

Though the solitude was intended to torture Mia, it is the best thing that ever happened to her. She spends the time healing while trying to figure out who she is and what she wants.

Before long, she realizes she’s not truly alone in her paradise. John claims to be her guardian but insists she needs to go back to her old life. How could that possibly be good?

Together they strive to figure out why Mia’s life was manipulated and who is responsible. Their journey uncovers deceit and evil—and their love for each other.

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Victoria Smith wrote her first romance at the age of nine and hid the story from her brothers to avoid being teased. Her mother recently found the folded notebook paper and, if you’re lucky, one day she’ll reveal the hero in that story. Now, she writes urban fantasy, paranormal romance, romantic suspense and women’s fiction – always with a happy, or at least satisfying, ending.

Writing Tips for the Week Ahead

August 5

Birthdays: Guy de Maupassant (1850), Ruth Sawyer (1880), Conrad Aiken (1889), Peter Viereck (1916), Wendell Berry (1934), David Baldacci(1960)

Ruth Sawyer won the 1937 Newbery Medal for “Roller Skates”

Conrad Aiken won the 1930 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry

Peter Viereck won the 1939 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry

Quote:

“We have lived our lives by the assumption that what was good for us would be good for the world. We have been wrong. We must change our lives so that it will be possible to live by the contrary assumption, that what is good for the world will be good for us. And that requires that we make the effort to know the world and learn what is good for it.” ― Wendell Berry, The Long-Legged House

“Especially among Christians in positions of wealth and power, the idea of reading the Gospels and keeping Jesus’ commandments as stated therein has been replaced by a curious process of logic. According to this process, people first declare themselves to be followers of Christ, and then they assume that whatever they say or do merits the adjective “Christian”.” ― Wendell Berry, Blessed are the Peacemakers: Christ’s Teachings of Love, Compassion, and Forgiveness

 “It is precisely the sort of thing I am always trying to do in my writing – to present my unhappy reader with a wide-ranged chaos – of actions and reactions, thoughts, memories and feelings – in the vain hope that at the end he will see that the whole thing represents only one moment, one feeling, one person. A raging, trumpeting jungle of associations, and then I announce at the end of it, with a gesture of despair, ‘This is I!” ― Conrad Aiken, Blue Voyage

Tip: Never be so hard on yourself that you give up. Keep at it. It’s not easy, but it can be done.

Jumpstart: Write about your first day of something: school, college, work, etc. Be specific about your feelings, experience, setting, etc.

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August 6

Birthdays: Alfred Lord Tennyson (1809), Charles Fort (1874), Norma Farber (1909), Constance Heaven (1911), Richard Hofstadter (1916), Barbara Cooney (1917), John Graves (1920), Elizabeth Beresford (1926), Piers Anthony (1934), Diane di Prima (1934), Conor McPherson (1971), Paolo Bacigalupi (1972)

Richard Hofstadter was a two-time winner of the Pulitzer Prize for Nonfiction.

Barbara Cooney was a two-time winner of the Caldecott Medal

Paolo Bacigalupi won the Hugo and Nebula awards for his book “The Wind-up Girl”

Quote: The more I write stories for young people, and the more young readers I meet, the more I’m struck by how much kids long to see themselves in stories. To see their identities and perspectives—their avatars—on the page. Not as issues to be addressed or as icons for social commentary, but simply as people who get to do cool things in amazing worlds. -Paolo Bacigalupi

“I believe that children in this country need a more robust literary diet than they are getting. …It does not hurt them to read about good and evil, love and hate, life and death. Nor do I think they should read only about things that they understand. ‘…a man’s reach should exceed his grasp.’ So should a child’s. For myself, I will never talk down to, or draw down to, children. (from the author’s acceptance speech for the Caldecott award)” ― Barbara Cooney, Chanticleer and the Fox

“A good notion for a novel is far too precious to waste; it must be caught the moment it flashes into mental view, or it will escape to the brain of some other writer who really doesn’t deserve it.”― Piers Anthony, On A Pale Horse

Tip: Don’t forget to give back to the universe. Help other authors where you can. Actually, help anybody. Little kindnesses can come back to you in many ways.

Jumpstart: Your character is in a non-motorized boat in the middle of a large lake when a sudden storm blows up… what now?

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August 7

Birthdays: Louis Leakey (1903), James Randi (1928), Betsy Byars (1928), Jerry Poumelle (1933), Garrison Keillor (1942), Anne Fadiman (1953), Vladimir Sorokin (1955)

Betsy Byars won the 1971 Newbery Medal for “Summer of the Swans”. She also won a National Book Award for Children’s Fiction and an Edgar Award.

Jerry Poumelle is best known for “The Mote in God’s Eye” and “Lucifer’s Hammer” (in collaboration with Larry Niven).

Quote: “Those who believe without reason cannot be convinced by reason.”― James Randi

“Anyone who thinks sitting in church can make you a Christian must also think that sitting in a garage can make you a car.” ― Garrison Keillor

“When I type a title page, I hold it and I look at it and I think, I just need four thousand sentences to go with this and I’ll have a book.” – Betsy Byars

Tip: Professional jealousy exists. Try not to let it control you. If a friend gets better contracts, etc. than you, be happy for them. Celebrate their success.

Jumpstart: An asteroid is going to hit Earth and there are only enough ships and room on the moon for a small portion of the population. You’re the person who has to choose. How do you do it and who do you save?

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August 8

Birthdays: Sara Teasdale (1884), Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings (1896), Maia Wojciechowska (1927), Valerie Sayers (1952), Jostein Gaarder (1952), Ian Pears (1955), Anastasia M. Ashman (1964)

Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings won the 1939 Pulitzer Prize for Fiction for her book “The Yearling”

Sara Teasdale won the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry for her book “Love Songs”

Maia Wojciechowska won the 1956 Newbery Medal for “Shadow of a Bull”

Quotes: What a strange world. If you believed in Christianity or Islam, it was called ‘faith’. But if you believed in astrology or Friday the thirteenth it was superstition! Who had the right to call other people’s belief superstition?” – Jostein Gaarder

 “We cannot live without the Earth or apart from it, and something is shrivelled in a man’s heart when he turns away from it and concerns himself only with the affairs of men”

― Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings, Cross Creek

Tip: Reward yourself even for small victories. Finish your first novel? Celebrate. Submit? Yay! Contract? That calls for a real celebration. Be sure to enjoy the small steps along the way as well as the big ones. Even if it’s something as small as “I wrote today”.

Jumpstart: Your character wakes without the ability to communicate with those around her. What does she do?

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August 9

Birthdays: Izaak Walton (1593), John Dryden (1631), Jean Piaget (1896), Pamela Travers (1899), Tove Jansson (1914), Philip Larkin (1922), Daniel Keyes (1927), Robert Shaw (1927), Seymour Simon (1931), Graeme Gibson (1934), Shirlee Busbee (1941), Pat McKissack (1944), Barbara Delinsky (1945), John Varley (1947), Jonathan Kellerman (1949), Gene Yang (1973)

Pamela (P.L.) Travers is best known for her book “Mary Poppins”

Daniel Keyes is best known for his Hugo and Nebula-winning work “Flowers for Algernon”

Quote: “The principle goal of education in the schools should be creating men and women who are capable of doing new things, not simply repeating what other generations have done; men and women who are creative, inventive and discoverers, who can be critical and verify, and not accept, everything they are offered.” ― Jean Piaget

“All good fiction involves an element of mystery – ideally, the reader should be compelled to turn the page in order to find out what happens next. Crime novels use extreme events – matters of life and death – to catalyze the story. That kind of intensity appeals to me.” – Jonathan Kellerman

Tip: Put the book you’ve just finished writing away for at least a week. Watch movies, read other books, take long walks, relax. Or, better yet, start your next book. Do anything other than look at your manuscript. That way, you can come back to it with a fresh eye.

Jumpstart: P.L. Travers was born on August 9, 1899. Never heard of her? I’d be willing to bet you’ve heard of Mary Poppins. Travers wrote several books about everybody’s favorite nanny. Imagine you’re a friend of Mary Poppins. Who would you be and what would your quirk be? No fair picking something from the book or movie. How do you know Mary?

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August 10

Birthdays: Curt Siodmak (1902), Ward Moore (1903), Jorge Amado (1912), Nancy Buckingham (1924), Barry Unsworth (1930), Mark Doty (1953), Susan Lewis (1956), Suzanne Collins (1962)

Mark Doty won the 2008 National Book Award for Poetry for “Fire to Fire”

Suzanne Collins is best known for her trilogy “Hunger Games”

Quote: “But I mind fanatics, the ones who try to impose their beliefs on you.” ― Susan Lewis, A Class Apart

“Get to know your characters. Don’t be afraid to listen to them. In fact, if they aren’t talking to you, you’ve got a problem.” Susan Lewis

“Have fun with an opening line. You don’t have to use it in the final draft, but it’s a good way to start.” – Susan Lewis

Tip: Plot can take two basic forms, or even a combination of the two. It will usually be either a three-act structure (beginning, middle, end), or, from Joseph Campbell’s writings, be a mythic journey. It can also be a combination of the mythic journey within the three-act structure.

Jumpstart: You’re going to visit a favorite relative you haven’t seen in years. You’ve kept in touch by phone and letter, but not visually. When you see him/her, you’re shocked by their appearance. Why?

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August 11

Birthdays: Alex Haley (1921), Andre Dubus (1936), Joanna Cole (1944), Don Freeman (1908)

Tip: We do research to get our facts straight, but don’t get lost in the research. You can while away an entire afternoon looking things up. Find your one item, note it and move on. Or mark the passage for a later time.

Quote: “The trick is not in becoming a writer, it is in staying a writer. Day after week after month after year.” – Harlan Ellison

Jumpstart: What are your top five…anything (desserts, music, movies, etc.). Why are they your top five? What is it about them that you like so much?

New Book up for Preorder

Fighting a friend is never easy. Killing one is even harder.

Facing down an ancient evil, special agent Elizabeth St. John is outnumbered, outgunned, and outmatched. Local cop Kaeden Pike is the perfect choice to help her but letting him—or anyone—into her life and heart is the most difficult challenge she’s ever faced. Kaeden has never found the one person who fit him, until now. But how can he convince Liz that they make the perfect pair, especially when the end of the world is coming? Someone has to gather the forces of good to win this fight, but when Liz accepts the role, she finds that being alone isn’t a choice she has to make. Almost losing Kaeden to the evil who already took the only other person she’s ever trusted convinces her to open her heart and let him in…where he belongs.

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Award Finalist: Gini Rifkin

Finalist Colorado Author’s League for Historical and Romance

Break Heart Canyon

by Gini Rifkin

Category: Romance / Western

Unearthing artifacts in Colorado sounded like easy money to Ryker Landry. Then he met the woman who owned the land. Una MacLaren vows no fortune hunter will desecrate the ancient relics of Break Heart Canyon—even if the man is a handsome scoundrel. Fighting to keep her goat farm afloat as local cattlemen hatch deadly schemes to make sure she fails, Una has enough to worry about. Captivated by the courageous redhead, Ryker joins forces with Una and her deerhound, MacTavish. But what does he desire most—the woman or the artifacts? When the mythical white cougar again prowls the rocky cliffs, the legend of Break Heart Canyon draws them into a web of danger. Only daring and blind trust can save them.

ISBN: (digital) 9781509244591  ISBN: (print) 9781509244584

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