WILD MAGIC by Alexandra Ivy

Fiction, Urban Fantasy, Paranormal, Romance

5*****

Blurb: From a Wyoming ranch to a New Jersey bookstore-café, when old-world demons, modern-day mages, and irresistible attraction collide, desire becomes the most powerful and dangerous weapon of all, in this spellbinding new series from the New York Times bestselling author. There was a time when demons reigned. That was before they were forced to retreat to the shadows. Today, in hidden corners across the globe their evil blood still pools, and the authority of their new rulers—the Vampire Cabal—must never be challenged. Leave it to a Jersey girl to change ancient history . . .   At sixteen, when Peri Sanguis’s wild magic first appeared, she was forced to flee her Wyoming ranch—and her suddenly murderous family—to save her own life. On the East Coast, tutored by mages who run the Witch’s Brew bookstore-cafe, Peri’s world seems magically tranquil—until her estranged mother and a coven of witches are slaughtered. Now, to solve the violent mysteries of her past, she must put her trust, body and soul, in a sensual immortal who is every woman’s darkest fantasy . . .   The golden-eyed vampire, Valen, has never wanted more than to claim an untamed female like Peri. Lured into each other’s orbit, and working together against a resurrected evil brings them intimately closer—to danger, blood betrayals, all-consuming passion, and to sacrifices that must be made to save themselves and the world . . .

Thoughts:

I loved this story. Peri and Valen are the perfect foils for each other. Peri is a mage who is fiercely independent with a tragic background. Valen is an ancient vampire who is powerful, rich, arrogant, and bossy. He wants Peri to be his, but he won’t curb her need for independence. Peri is drawn to him, but also fears what he could do to her.

They are really well-drawn characters and the world building is excellent as well (though I did want to know more about the magical Gyre). The plot flows well from tense action to catch-your-breath breaks. There is romance – and some heat (but not overwhelming), a lot of suspense, and drama.

Though the story did end well, this is obviously the first in a series as there were some threads left dangling to tease us for what’s coming next.

Definitely recommended.

Disclaimer: All opinions expressed in this review are my own and are not influenced by anyone.

Birthdays: Anatole France (1844), Gertrude Chandler Warner (1860), John Millington Synge (1871), Dorothy P. Lathrop (1891), Howard Mumford Jones (1892), Tristan Tzara (1896), Berton Roueche (1910), Garth Williams (1912), Kingsley Amis (1922), Carol Bly (1930), Diane Middlebrook (1939), Tracy K. Smith (1972)

Anatole France won the 1921 Nobel in Literature.

Dorothy Lathrop won the 1929 Newbery Medal for “Hitty, Her First Hundred Years”

Howard Jones won the 1965 Pulitzer for Nonfiction for “O Strange New World”

Tracey K. Smith won the 2011 Pulitzer for Poetry for “Life on Mars”

Quote: “Your readers expect a story, a story that answers the question, ‘So what, why do we care about what this person has done?’” – Diane Middlebrook

Tip: Many people confuse the words then/than. “Then” refers to time (we will do this first then that) while “than” is a choice (I’d rather do this than that)

Jumpstart: Take the first line from any book and write it into a paragraph, first as a mainstream book, then as a mystery, horror, science fiction, fantasy, and romance.

Birthdays: Henry James (1843), Corrie ten Boom (1892), Waverley Root (1903), Helene Hanff (1916), Tomas Transtromer (1931), Jeffrey Archer (1940), Jacqueline Briggs Martin (1945), Mons Kallentoft (1968), Omar Tyree (1969)

Corrie ten Boom is best known for her book about surviving the Holocaust “The Hiding Room”

Tomas Transtromer won the 2011 Nobel Prize in Literature.

Quote: “I usually know the first four or five chapters in detail, and the next 10 in outline, which will take me to the middle of the book. Then it’s time to pray.” – Jeffrey Archer

Tip: Homonyms are difficult for some people to recognize such as: there/their/they’re: “There” is a place (we are going there). “Their” is a possessive pronoun meaning it belongs to them (their house). “They’re” is a contraction for “they are” (They’re coming with us). Another stumbler is: peek/peak/pique. Peek is to take a quick look at something. Peak is the top of something, like a mountain. Pique is to feel resentment or to increase interest in something (his words piqued my curiosity). Check your work for homonyms. Spell check will not catch them!

Jumpstart: What kind of cartoon would you draw for the newspaper if you could? Would your main character be human or animal? Would it be a single strip or a continuing story? Write the dialogue for it and the descriptions of your characters.

Birthday: Hardie Gramatky (1907), Beverly Cleary (1916), Carol Emshwiller (1921), Alan Ayckbourn (1939), Tom Clancy (1947), Scott Turow (1949), Gary Soto (1952), Jon Krakauer (1954), Elliot Ackerman (1980)

Quote: “The truth of the matter is that the people who succeed in the arts most often are the people who get up again after getting knocked down. Persistence is critical.” – Scott Turow

Tip: Like redundancies, may writers pad their work with wordiness. Check out wordy phrases you tend to overuse. Some to look for: for the reason that (because); both of them are (both are); until such time as (until); the true fact is (the fact is)

Jumpstart: Go to the engagement/wedding section of your newspaper and pick out several couples. Write brief character sketches for the people. What are they really like? Why are they together? Mix and match couples and give them different mates. Why those?

REKINDLING HER HEART by Virginia Marlow

Fiction, Contemporary Romance, Novella

5*****

Blurb: Single mother, Mara Miller works two jobs to provide for her teenage daughter, Angelica Disillusioned and abandoned at eighteen, Mara’s given up on finding a man interested in more than a one-night stand. Until firefighter Bruce Moretti moves in down the hall. When Mara’s very ex-boyfriend appears demanding custody, she discovers Angie has been left a fortune. Money her ex plans to take any way he can. Bruce Moretti has his own demons to chase, and getting romantically involved with Mara isn’t on the agenda. But when Angie is in danger, he rushes in and finds his feelings for Mara are an inferno he never wants to end.

THOUGHTS: I really enjoyed this story, especially Bruce. Not only is he the stereotypical hero (fire/rescue man, tall, handsome, etc.), but he takes rebellious teen Angelica under his wing an helps her without being awful about it. Mara is just trying to do what she needs to do to keep her and her daughter safe from her ex. My favorite part, I think, was when Mara shows up at the school dressed like Angie, proving her point that not everyone dresses like that. There’s some heat with this book, but it works with the story.

Recommended.

Disclaimer: Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”

ASCENDANT: SONGS OF CHAOS by Michael R. Miller

Fiction, Fantasy

5*****

Blurb: Holt Cook was never meant to be a dragon rider. He has always served the Order Hall of the Crag dutifully, keeping their kitchen pots clean. Until he discovers a dark secret: dragons do not tolerate weakness among their kin, killing the young they deem flawed. Moved by pity, Holt defies the Order, rescues a doomed egg and vows to protect the blind dragon within. But the Scourge is rising. Undead hordes roam the land, spreading the blight and leaving destruction in their wake. The dragon riders are being slaughtered and betrayal lurks in the shadows. Holt has one chance to survive. He must cultivate the mysterious power of his dragon’s magical core. A unique energy which may tip the balance in the battles to come, and prove to the world that a servant is worthy after all.

THOUGHTS: This was an amazing story and, obviously, the beginning of a series. I loved Holt and Ash and their bond of love and acceptance. They definitely have challenges to face because of who and what they are. Holt should not have become a dragon rider and Ash should never have been born, but it’s a good thing they both did what they weren’t supposed to. I definitely look forward to the other books in this series.

Highly recommended for those looking for a good fantasy.

Birthdays: Charles Baudelaire (1821), Jacques Futrelle (1875), Joseph Krumgold (1908), Lev Kopelev (1912), Leonard Levy (1923), Paule Marshall (1929), Fern Michaels (1933), Robert Clark (1952), Ken Kalfus (1954), Kate Heyhoe (1955), Margaret Peterson Haddix (1964), Sam Harris (1967)

Jacques Futrelle was an American journalist and Titanic victim.

Joseph Krumgold was the first person to win two Newbery Medals.

Leonard Levy won the 1969 Pulitzer in History for “Origins of the Fifth Amendment”

Robert Clark won the Edgar Award for his 1999 novel “Mr. White’s Confession”

Quote: “Inspiration comes of working every day.” – Charles Baudelaire

Tip: Tell your reader how a character feels, and you’ve given your readers a fact. Show how s/he feels and you’ve given them an emotion. Of the two, emotions are much better than fact. Go through your story and find where you’ve given facts vs. shown us their emotions.

Jumpstart: Your heroine is sitting in a park and a woman in a dark coat dashes by and drops a note in her lap. It says, “meet me here at midnight or he dies.” What does your heroine do? Does she get help? Who will die? Why? Will she show up?

Birthdays: Harvey Cushing (1869), Margaret Ayer Barnes (1886), John Fante (1909), Glendon Swarthout (1918), Seymour Hersh (1937), Trina Schart Hyman (1939), James Herbert (1943), Robert Kiyosaki (1947), Barbara Kingsolver (1955), Nnedi Okorafor (1974), Sara Shepard (1977)

Harvey Cushing won a Pulizer for his biography of Sir William Osler.

Margaret Barnes won the 1931 Pulitzer for her first novel “Years of Grace”

Tina Hyman won the 1985 Caldecott for her work on “Saint George and the Dragon”

“In a world as wrong as this one, all we can do is make things as right as we can.”
― Barbara Kingsolver, The Bean Trees

Quote: “The only way to become a writer is to sit still and write. Close the door. Write with no one looking over your shoulder. Don’t try to figure out what other people want to hear from you; figure out what you have to say. It’s the one and only thing you have to offer.” – Barbara Kingsolver

Tip: All writing counts. If you can’t come up with a story to write, write a grocery list, a letter to your best friend or a relative, a to-do list – anything. Just let the words come. They may lead to something better.

Jumpstart: Pick two characters from a favorite book and describe their courtship but put a twist on it. For instance, make Rhett and Scarlett Yankees. How would their lives be different?

Birthdays: William Wordsworth (1770), Gabriela Mistral (1889), Gerald Brenan (1894), James White (1928), Donald Barthelme (1931), Iris Johansen (1938)

Gabriela Mistral won the Nobel Prize in Literature, the first Latin American to do so.

Quote: “The thing about books is, there are quite a number you don’t have to read.”
― Donald Barthelme, “The King”

Agents and editors do not like “wimpy housewives” or “Mary Jane” (also called Mary Sue) -a character who is too perfect with no flaws. Unrealistic characters—stereotypes with no thoughts other than what the main character in the story puts into their heads and no backbone until the last chapter. Make sure yours aren’t like this. Give them flaws and a backbone (when needed).

Jumpstart: You’ve been given a key that opens one of three chests. Inside one chest is a million dollars, tax free. A second one holds a powerful poison that will kill you instantly. The third is empty. How do you choose which one to open? What happens?

Birthdays: Nicholas Chamfort (1741), Lowell Thomas (1892), Charles Jackson (1903), Leonora Carrington (1917), Graeme Base (1958), Vince Flynn (1966), Darrel Bristow-Bovey (1971)

Quote: “[The writer] must essentially draw from life as he sees it, lives it, overhears it or steals it, and the truer the writer, perhaps the bigger the blackguard. He lives by biting the hand that feeds him.” – Charles Jackson

Tip: Waiting in line or at the doctor’s office is never a waste of time. Observe features, dress, grooming, stance, mannerisms, speech of others—use these for characters.

Jumpstart: You’ve been given the ability to go back in time and change one thing in history. Would you? If so, what? Why or why not?