Month: August 2023
August 20
Birthdays: H.P. Lovecraft (1890), Jacqueline Susann (1918), Jeff Brown (1926), Edgar A. Guest (1881), Sue Alexander (1933), Lionel G. Garcia (1935), Heather McHugh (1948), Kevin Baker (1958), Diedre Madden (1960), Greg Bear (1951), James Rollins (1961), Etgar Keret (1967)
Quote: “The hardest theme in science fiction is that of the alien. The simplest solution of all is in fact quite profound—that the real difficulty lies not in understanding what is alien, but in understanding what is self. We are all aliens to each other, all different and divided. We are even aliens to ourselves at different stages of our lives. Do any of us remember precisely what it was like to be a baby?” – Greg Bear
When I write I do five drafts. The first is on inexpensive white paper. I don’t try for style, I just spill it all out. The second draft is on yellow paper, that’s when I work on characterisations. The third is pink, I work on story motivations. Then blue, that’s where I cut, cut, cut.” – Jacqueline Susann
Tip: Weak words: Shakespeare didn’t call Katherina a “mean woman”. He called her a “shrew”. When a cat is chasing a mouse, it doesn’t “jump suddenly”; it “pounces”. A starving person “wolfs” his food. The words shrew, pounce and wolf are stronger than the lukewarm phrases they replace. Check your work for weak words.
Jumpstart: The moon has disappeared from the sky. What happened? What effect does it have?

August 19 Writing
Birthdays: John Dryden (1631), Samuel Richardson (1689), Ogden Nash (1902), James Gould Cozzens (1903), Ring Lardner, Jr. (1915), Frank McCourt (1930), Jack Canfield (1944), Greg Jonathan Coe (1961), Veronica Roth (1988)
Jack Canfield is best known as the co-creator of the “Chicken Soup for the Soul” series.
Jonathan Coe holds the record for the writing the longest sentence in the literature of the English language – 13955 words (beating out James Joyce’s “Ulysses”)
Quote: “People of little understanding are most apt to be angry when their sense is called into question.” ― Samuel Richardson
“Keep Scribbling! Something will happen.” – Frank McCourt
Tip: A malapropism is the misuse of one word for another in a comical manner, such as “I took him for granite.” (instead of “granted”). They can be used for effect, but don’t overuse.
Jumpstart: I had to stop it somehow. I’d buried too many friends…and enemies. But how? I’d given everything I could and still…

August 18 Writing
Birthdays: A.A. Milne (1882), William Sansom (1912), Elsa Morante (1912), Brian Aldiss (1925), Robert Anton Wilson (1932), Sonia Levitin (1934), Paula Danziger (1944), Brian Pinkney (1961), Nicole Krauss (1974),
Quote: “How do you spell ‘love’?” – Piglet
“You don’t spell it…you feel it.” – Pooh”
― A.A. Milne
“A writer wants something more than money for his work: he wants permanence.” – A.A. Milne
Tip: Which witch is which? They’re over there with their parents. To be, or two bee—which is the right question? Homonyms trip up more writers than any other words. The most common mix-ups are usually those dealing with apostrophes, especially it’s vs. its and they’re/their/there. And you can’t rely on a spell check program to find these errors for you. They aren’t spelled incorrectly—but they are often used incorrectly. Have someone who knows the difference check your work.
Jumpstart: They say that time heals all wounds, but years have passed since that day, and I still feel…

August 17 Writing Tips
Birthdays: Ted Hughes (1930), V.S. Naipaul (1932), Herta Muller (1953), Jonathan Franzen (1959), Jessie Burton (1982),
V.S. Naipaul won the 2001 Nobel Prize in Literature
Herta Muller won the 2009 Nobel Prize in Literature
Jonathan Franzen won the 2001 National Book Award for Fiction
Quote: “You are who you choose to be.” ― Ted Hughes, The Iron Man
“Read it out loud. I did this five times with The Muse – exhausting, but helpful. The brain, when you read silently, often corrects things for you. It’s only when you hear the rhythm of your sentences aloud, does your choice of words fall, or clear the hurdle. Muddy images, unintentionally repetitious adjectives, things that just don’t *land*…the list goes on.” – Jessie Burton
Tip: When a writer stutters, it means that s/he has used the same major word twice within the same sentence or paragraph, or has started too many sentences or paragraphs the same way, has given all his or her characters names that start with the same letter, or has repeated the same action too many times. Look over your work. How often have you “stuttered”?
Jumpstart: You’re on your way back from a trip. At the luggage kiosk, you grab what you’re sure is your bag. After all, it had that red ribbon you specifically tied to it. When you get home, you open it and find…
Fun Read
This is part of the “One Scoop or Two” series of novella length, ice-cream related stories from The Wild Rose Press. Enjoy!

Spooky Tutti Frutti
by Margaret L. Carter
Category: Fantasy Fiction
Series: One Scoop or Two
A midsummer sailboat race is coming to Annapolis, and Celia Rossi’s 1950s-themed ice cream parlor will have a booth at the waterfront celebration. To keep her business flourishing, she needs to impress both locals and tourists on the festive day. But how? She receives unexpected help when she hires a part-time worker who pops up out of nowhere. Suzie Conroy proves to have an almost magical gift for the craft of artisanal ice cream, yet she acts clueless about some ordinary details of everyday life. And why is she so determined to churn up the perfect batch of tutti frutti?
ISBN: (digital) 9781509231683
Available through these fine retailers…
Review: Stonebridge

STONEBRIDGE by Linda Griffin
Fiction, Gothic Romance
3***
Blurb: After the death of her mother, Rynna goes to Stonebridge Manor to live with her great-grandmother, Edwina, and her disabled cousin, Ted. Almost immediately, she is aware of a mysterious presence who was murdered years before.
Thoughts: This book reminded me of the old gothic novels by Victoria Holt. It’s a romance, but it is dark with a slightly less than happily ever after ending. The story does have what may be triggers for some (spousal abuse). There’s also murder, and a ghost with a vengeful bent.
Set in the mid-50s, Rynna moves to Stonebridge Manor—a dark, imposing structure—with her great-grandmother and cousin Ted after the death of her mother, Pamela. There are also servants—something she’s never had to deal with—and a second cousin, Jason. In the music room, Rynna feels a presence, perhaps her aunt (name) who was killed by her husband—Jason’s father. There’s a lot going on in this story, all of it about family relationships.
Recommendation: This is a good story with a ghost, murder, darkness…and hope at the end. But also a touch of angst. If you’re looking for something different, this is it.
Disclaimer: Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
Asking for Reviews
I’m coming back from a long weekend writer’s retreat and playing catch up on my emails and all the stuff that makes up life. In my emails, I found several requests for reviews, some of which I had to turn down. Reviews are difficult to get (and give) and I try very hard to accommodate authors, but I do have my limits – as do most reviewers. Thus, this notice.
When you go to a reviewer website, please be sure you read all their rules and preferences. Lately, I’ve had to turn down multiple requests for reviews for “thrillers with terrorists” – I will not read them. Nor do I do zombies or horror. Or anything with graphic gore. Just because your best friend thought it was the best book ever, that doesn’t mean I will like it.
Reviewing is very subjective. One person may absolutely love a book while another will not. That doesn’t mean it’s a good or bad book – it just means the people reading it have different opinions. The writing may be brilliant, but that doesn’t mean every reader will enjoy the book.
I spend a lot of time reviewing books – time I could spend on my own writing, but I try to help my fellow authors where I can. I also spotlight books and authors I like. I do not charge for this even though it does take a lot of my time. So a word of advice – if you want a review, read the preferences of the sites you go to and follow them.
Thank you for coming to the Sparkling Reviews site.
Writing Tips, Thoughts for the week ahead
August 12
Birthdays: Helena Blavatsky (1831), Jacinto Benavente (1866), Edith Hamilton (1867), Mary Roberts Rinehart (1876), Zema Sharp (1889), Ruth Stiles Gannett (1923), Donald Justice (1925), Wallace Markfield (1926), William Goldman (1931), Walter Dean Myers (1937), Gail Parent (1940), Deborah Howe (1946), Sue Monk Kidd (1948), Ann Martin (1955), Katherine Boo (1964), Anthony Swofford (1970)
Zema Sharp is known for creating the “Dick and Jane” readers.
Donald Justice won the 1980 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry for “Selected Poems”
Deborah Howe is known for the “Bunnicula” series written with her husband.
Quote: “It has always seemed strange to me that in our endless discussions about education so little stress is laid on the pleasure of becoming an educated person, the enormous interest it adds to life. To be able to be caught up into the world of thought—that is to be educated.” [Saturday Evening Post, September 27, 1958]” ― Edith Hamilton
“Everyone thinks that having a talent is a matter of luck; no one thinks that luck could be a matter of talent.” ― Jacinto Benavente
Tip: Get yourself a good dictionary, thesaurus, and grammar book—or know where to look for them online. The Chicago Manual of Style is considered the best for most writing. Also Merriam-Webster’s Dictionary and Roget’s Thesaurus. And use them!
Jumpstart: Pretend you’re a doll living in a doll house. What is it like? What do you see from your vantage point? Who plays with you? In what way?
&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 13
Birthdays: Alfred Hitchcock (1899), Kamila Shamsie (1973), Tom Perotta (1961), Sharon Kay Penman (1945), Nikolaus Lenau (1802)
Quote: “The hardest part about being a writer is not getting your commas in the right place, but getting your head in the right place.” – Ralph Keyes
Tip: Secondary characters should not take over a scene unless there’s a very good reason. They are there to support the main characters or add color to the story, not to be the main reason for the story. If they start to take over, then maybe you’re telling the story from the wrong point of view.
Jumpstart: Pick a famous piece of art or sculpture and write about the artist as s/he was creating it.
&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 14
Birthdays: Russell Baker (1925), William Kittredge (1932), Alice Provensen (1918)
Quote: “Get out of your own way. Do not let the hows and whys stop you from writing. “ – Susan Macias
Tip: Read your dialogue out loud. Does it sound like real people are talking? Or is it stilted and long winded? You should strive to keep dialogue real, but don’t copy real speech. If you listen to real people talking, you’ll find that most conversations are full of inanities.
Jumpstart: You’re on your way to a job interview. You stop at a convenience store for some coffee and a rude person cuts in front of you. Then turns and spills his drink on your new suit. And blames you. You tell him off….and get to the interview a few minutes late only to see him on the other side of the desk. What do you do?
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 15
Birthdays: Sir Walter Scott (1771), Thomas de Quincey (1785), Edith Nesbit (1858), Sri Aurobindo (1872), Edna Ferber (1885), Julia Child (1912), Leonard Baskin (1922), Linda Ellerbee (1944), Garry Disher (1949), Stieg Larsson (1954), Mary Jo Salter (1954)
Edna Ferber won the 1924 Pulitzer for Fiction for “So Big”
Quote: “Books should be cherished, like children, books are for the next generation, like children, like history.” – Edna Ferber
Tip: When writing a scene with setting, don’t forget about background noises we hear every day—birds chirping (or not for suspense), traffic, thunder, etc. Also think about background smells and other sensory items.
Jumpstart: The old stairs creaked and groaned under her weight and she was afraid the noise would…
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 16
Birthdays: Hugo Gernsback (1884), T.E. Lawrence (1888), Georgette Heyer (1902), Wallace Thurman (1902), William Maxwell, Jr. (1908), Matt Christopher (1917), Charles Bukowski (1920), Diana Wynne Jones (1934), Benjamin Alire Saenz (1954), Jennifer Donnelly (1963), Valeria Luiselli (1983)
Hugo Gernsback’s contributions to science fiction were so great that the prestigious Hugo Award is named for him.
T.E. Lawrence is well known as Lawrence of Arabia. His books include “Seven Pillars of Wisdom” and “Revolt in the Desert”
Georgette Heyer essentially began the Regency romance genre of writing.
William Maxwell, Jr. won the 1982 National Book Award for “So Long, See You Tomorrow”
Benjamin Alire Saenz won the 1992 American Book Award for “Calendar of Dust”
Quote: “A library is a place full of mouth-watering food for thought.” – Diana Wynne Jones
Tip: Passive vs. active voice: active voice (preferred) is when the subject of the sentence is doing something while passive is where the thing is having something done to it. Active: John threw the ball. Passive: the ball was thrown by John. Active voice gives your writing more impact.
Jumpstart: You hate big, fancy parties but must attend one coming up because it’s in your honor. What did you do? What happens?
&&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 17
Birthdays: Ted Hughes (1930), V.S. Naipaul (1932), Herta Muller (1953), Jonathan Franzen (1959), Jessie Burton (1982),
V.S. Naipaul won the 2001 Nobel Prize in Literature
Herta Muller won the 2009 Nobel Prize in Literature
Jonathan Franzen won the 2001 National Book Award for Fiction
Quote: “You are who you choose to be.” ― Ted Hughes, The Iron Man
“Read it out loud. I did this five times with The Muse – exhausting, but helpful. The brain, when you read silently, often corrects things for you. It’s only when you hear the rhythm of your sentences aloud, does your choice of words fall, or clear the hurdle. Muddy images, unintentionally repetitious adjectives, things that just don’t *land*…the list goes on.” – Jessie Burton
Tip: When a writer stutters, it means that s/he has used the same major word twice within the same sentence or paragraph, or has started too many sentences or paragraphs the same way, has given all his or her characters names that start with the same letter, or has repeated the same action too many times. Look over your work. How often have you “stuttered”?
Jumpstart: You’re on your way back from a trip. At the luggage kiosk, you grab what you’re sure is your bag. After all, it had that red ribbon you specifically tied to it. When you get home, you open it and find…
&&&&&&&&&&&&&
August 18
Birthdays: A.A. Milne (1882), William Sansom (1912), Elsa Morante (1912), Brian Aldiss (1925), Robert Anton Wilson (1932), Sonia Levitin (1934), Paula Danziger (1944), Brian Pinkney (1961), Nicole Krauss (1974),
Quote: “How do you spell ‘love’?” – Piglet
“You don’t spell it…you feel it.” – Pooh”
― A.A. Milne
“A writer wants something more than money for his work: he wants permanence.” – A.A. Milne
Tip: Which witch is which? They’re over there with their parents. To be, or two bee—which is the right question? Homonyms trip up more writers than any other words. The most common mix-ups are usually those dealing with apostrophes, especially it’s vs. its and they’re/their/there. And you can’t rely on a spell check program to find these errors for you. They aren’t spelled incorrectly—but they are often used incorrectly. Have someone who knows the difference check your work.
Jumpstart: They say that time heals all wounds, but years have passed since that day, and I still feel…
Happy Anniversary
I don’t normally do personal posts, but… today is my 50th anniversary. Yep, I’ve been married to the same guy for fifty years. That’s a half a century. And yes, I am *that* old. LOL. So just for the fun of it, I’m going to spotlight some books and things that were around fifty years ago.
First, “The Reader’s Digest Condensed Books” was quite popular back then.
Revolution In the Air: Songs of Bob Dylan
A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula LeGuin
Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Richard Bach
The Odessa File by Frederick Forsythe
Once is Not Enough by Jacqueline Susanne
Breakfast of Champions by Kurt Vonnegut
The Hollow Hills by Mary Stewart
The Honorary Consul by Graham Greene
Burr by Gore Vidal
The Princess Bride by William Goldman
Rendezvous with Rama by Arthur C. Clarke
A Wind in the Door by Madeleine L’Engle
I’m OK, You’re OK by Thomas Harris
Dr. Atkins Diet Revolution by Robert Atkins
The Joy of Sex by Alex Comfort
Top 100 songs of 1973:
“Tie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Ole Oak Tree”Tony Orlando and Dawn
“Bad, Bad Leroy Brown”Jim Croce
“Killing Me Softly with His Song”Roberta Flack
“Let’s Get It On”Marvin Gaye
“My Love”Paul McCartney & Wings
“Why Me”Kris Kristofferson
“Crocodile Rock”Elton John
“Will It Go Round in Circles”Billy Preston
“You’re So Vain”Carly Simon
“Touch Me in the Morning”Diana Ross
“The Night the Lights Went Out in Georgia”Vicki Lawrence
“Playground in My Mind”Clint Holmes
“Brother Louie”Stories
“Delta Dawn”Helen Reddy
“Me and Mrs. Jones”Billy Paul
“Frankenstein”The Edgar Winter Group
“Drift Away”Dobie Gray
“Little Willy”Sweet
“You Are the Sunshine of My Life”Stevie Wonder
“Half-Breed”Cher
“That Lady”The Isley Brothers
“Pillow Talk”Sylvia Robinson
“We’re an American Band”Grand Funk Railroad
“Right Place Wrong Time”Dr. John
“Wildflower”Skylark
“Superstition”Stevie Wonder
“Loves Me Like a Rock”Paul Simon
“The Morning After”Maureen McGovern
“Rocky Mountain High”John Denver
“Stuck in the Middle with You”Stealers Wheel
“Shambala”Three Dog Night
“Love Train”The O’Jays
“I’m Gonna Love You Just a Little More Baby”Barry White
“Say, Has Anybody Seen My Sweet Gypsy Rose”Tony Orlando and Dawn
“Keep on Truckin'”Eddie Kendricks
“Danny’s Song”Anne Murray
“Dancing in the Moonlight”King Harvest
“Monster Mash”Bobby ‘Boris’ Pickett
“Natural High”Bloodstone
“Diamond Girl”Seals and Crofts
“Long Train Runnin'”The Doobie Brothers
“Give Me Love (Give Me Peace on Earth)”George Harrison
“If You Want Me to Stay”Sly & the Family Stone
“Daddy’s Home”Jermaine Jackson
“Neither One of Us (Wants to Be the First to Say Goodbye)”Gladys Knight & the Pips
“I’m Doin’ Fine Now”New York City
“Could It Be I’m Falling in Love”The Spinners
“Daniel”Elton John
“Midnight Train to Georgia”Gladys Knight & the Pips
“Smoke on the Water”Deep Purple
“The Cover of the Rolling Stone”Dr. Hook & The Medicine Show
“Behind Closed Doors”Charlie Rich
“Your Mama Don’t Dance”Loggins and Messina
“Feelin’ Stronger Every Day”Chicago
“The Cisco Kid”War
“Live and Let Die”Paul McCartney & Wings
“Oh, Babe, What Would You Say?”Hurricane Smith
“I Believe in You (You Believe in Me)”Johnnie Taylor
“Sing”The Carpenters
“Ain’t No Woman (Like the One I’ve Got)”The Four Tops
“Dueling Banjos”Eric Weissberg & Steve Mandell
“Higher Ground”Stevie Wonder
“Here I Am (Come and Take Me)”Al Green
“My Maria”B.W. Stevenson
“Superfly”Curtis Mayfield
“Last Song”Edward Bear
“Get Down”Gilbert O’Sullivan
“Reelin’ in the Years”Steely Dan
“Hocus Pocus”Focus
“Yesterday Once More”The Carpenters
“Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy”Bette Midler
“Clair”Gilbert O’Sullivan
“Do It Again”Steely Dan
“Kodachrome”Paul Simon
“Why Can’t We Live Together”Timmy Thomas
“Do You Wanna Dance?”Bette Midler
“So Very Hard to Go”Tower of Power
“Rockin’ Pneumonia and the Boogie Woogie Flu”Johnny Rivers
“Ramblin’ Man”The Allman Brothers Band
“Masterpiece”The Temptations
“Peaceful”Helen Reddy
“One of a Kind (Love Affair)”The Spinners
“Funny Face”Donna Fargo
“Funky Worm”Ohio Players
“Angie”The Rolling Stones
“Jambalaya (On the Bayou)”Blue Ridge Rangers
“Don’t Expect Me to Be Your Friend”Lobo
“Break Up to Make Up”The Stylistics
“Daisy a Day”Jud Strunk
“Also Sprach Zarathustra ()”Deodato
“Stir It Up”Johnny Nash
“Money”Pink Floyd
“Gypsy Man”War
“The World Is a Ghetto”
“Yes We Can Can”The Pointer Sisters
“Free Ride”The Edgar Winter Group
“Space Oddity”David Bowie
“It Never Rains in Southern California”Albert Hammond
“The Twelfth of Never”Donny Osmond
“Papa Was a Rollin’ Stone”The Temptations
Other things from 1973:
Average Income: $10580.80
Cost of gas: $0.36 per gallon
Movie Ticket: $1.77
Loaf of Bread: $0.27
Stamps: $0.08

